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The darkness like a well,
That fills with endless water
Splashing over sides
And drowning all inside

Scars of knives and pins,
Piercing deep within
Deflating and depressing
The feelings that are within

The pain that comes,
As water fills the lungs
Pressing feelings down within
And poking holes to let the air in

My heart, like glass
Balanced on a string
Blowing in the wind
And losing all control
And darkness comes
And fills my soul
Depression can take its toll
©2008-2009 ~twilightcat
:icontwilightcat:

Author's Comments

i wanted to try a slightly different style but i think i reverted in the end. depression again obviously, a recurring theme of mine

thanks for readin'
twilight

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very nice poem

'My heart, like glass
Balanced on a string'

that's a brilliant line, lovin it keep up the good work :)

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